Reading and writing is a personal activity that allows people to express themselves.  It is best when the inspiration comes from within the person as opposed to being pushed onto someone from the outside.  One of the things that is working so far in my project is my personal reflection and examples of various writing and reading experiences.  I feel like I do well at going into depth in order to solidify the points I try to make in the paper.  With that said, I would like to add to and remove some parts of my reflections that I noticed would strengthen my argument further.

One of the things I would like to add is a more detailed approach as to how reading is a personal activity and how my experiences have exemplified this.  I also want to use this aspect of personal experience to complicate my argument slightly going into how literature can also be social and interactive with others.  In addition, after learning so much about hypertext, I would like to add a section on hypertext and how it is a good example of being creative.  It is yet another form of literature that people are expressing themselves through, which is the essence of what I believe reading and writing is.  With this I might include descriptions of “Faith”, a hypertext poem.  Aspects that I want to focus on are my transitioning from paragraph to paragraph and talking to the reader more directly.  Sometimes while writing I get preoccupied in what I say and forget that I am writing to an audience about an argument I wish to sell them on.

The element from my to-do list that I would like to focus on is sentence structure, especially the problem of run on sentences.  I plan to address this problem with proper placement of commas, breaking up sentences with too many components/thoughts, and thoroughly proofreading my paper.